Final Draft Feedback

 Today I received feedback on my preliminary report for my final year project. These were some of the comments made:

  • Clearly define whether the project is a manufacturing profile, operations plan, framework, etc
  • Place more emphasis on the objectives
  • Summarize the length literature review
  • Include the questionnaire results in the report instead of the appendix
  • Change the format of the desk research table
  • CUT DOWN WHERE POSSIBLE
To do so, I will spend quite some time adjusting the objectives to suit what exactly I would like to focus on. Moving forward it is a matter of utilizing the information within the report which is better than lacking information. In my opinion, it is easier to cut down than add. 

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  1. Mickella Ramoutar12/11/21 12:38 PM

    Based on my supervisor's feedback, I defined the project to be a manufacturing plan and clearly identified my 5 major objectives. I included SmartArt to help summarize in the literature review. I changed the desk research table into a list figure. I tried my best to cut down where I could.

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