Final Draft Submission

 A final draft was submitted today to my supervisor, Dr. Pemberton. I feel very relieved as I really tried my best for this project and I hope it is represented as such. I hope to receive constructive feedback since I am very open to improving my project. I really want to do well in this preliminary report so I put a lot of time and energy into it. I am very thankful to Miss Pemberton for being so patient and easy to talk to which made this whole process quite simple and manageable. When talking to my fellow colleagues, I learned that this is a luxury that I am utmost grateful for. 

Personal concerns:

I am confident in my work. With that said, one of my greatest concerns currently is the length of my project. I am a bit worried that I was not concise enough and the information comes across as irrelevant. Any guidance from my supervisor in this regard will be very useful. I tried to look at each component separately but maybe a wider scope could have been taken. I just wanted to be thorough. I also hope that I have sufficiently discussed the key elements asked for in this preliminary report. 

I have approximately one week left to fix and edit my report to perfection and create my video presentation.